A sharper first screen
Headline, subhead, proof line, and CTA rewritten to make the value obvious in seconds.
Conversion copy in 24 hours
Make your landing page sound as useful as your product.
I turn vague B2B copy into a crisp story your buyer can understand, trust, and act on—without weeks of meetings or a giant agency bill.
Quick rewrite / 001 Ready
Before
The all-in-one platform for modern teams.
After
Get every client approval in one place—before another deadline slips.
Why it works Specific outcome. Clear audience. Real tension.
Clarity first. Clever second.
Clear beats clever✦One page, one day✦No meetings required✦Words ready to ship
The deliverable
A complete conversion copy sprint. Nothing bloated.
You get a focused rewrite, not a 60-slide strategy deck. Every line is written to help the next right customer say “this is for me.”
The complete page story
Up to seven sections, sequenced around the questions and objections your buyer actually has.
A priority fix list
Specific conversion notes ranked by impact, so you know what to change now and what can wait.
One clean revision
You send one round of feedback. I tighten the draft and return a ready-to-publish version.
How it works
Your page gets clearer by tomorrow.
No kickoff call. No calendar ping-pong. Just the context I need, a focused working session, and copy you can paste into your site.
- 01
Send the page
Share your URL, ideal buyer, offer, and the action you want them to take.
- 02
I find the friction
I map the buyer’s questions, cut vague claims, and rebuild the page around one clear promise.
- 03
You get the rewrite
Within 24 hours, receive the copy, page structure, fix list, and rationale in one clean document.
The standard
Human judgment. Fast execution.
✓ Built around your product, market, and actual customer.
✓ Written for clarity—not stuffed with copywriting clichés.
✓ Delivered with reasoning, so every change makes sense.
✓ Sized for founders and small teams who need momentum now.
Start small
See one rewrite before you buy the sprint.
Send your landing page URL. I’ll reply with one concrete copy improvement at no charge. If the direction feels right, the full sprint is a flat $149.
Launch rate$149
One page · First draft in 24h · One revision
Get your free rewrite No call required. No obligation.Free first look
Show me the page. I’ll show you the clearest next move.
Share just enough context for a useful review. I’ll send one concrete rewrite at no charge; if you want the full page, the sprint is $149.
Good to know
Simple questions, straight answers.
What kinds of pages?
B2B SaaS, service businesses, productized offers, and focused lead-generation pages.
What does “one page” mean?
Up to seven core sections. If your page is unusually long, I’ll confirm scope before we start.
Do you design or build it?
This sprint covers copy and page structure. You receive implementation-ready words, not a coded redesign.
When does the clock start?
As soon as I have your completed brief and payment. The first draft arrives within 24 hours.